The Haiku Game - Page 2

08-29-2004, 06:57 AM

deleted terrible haiku this post.

I, Brian · 08-29-2004, 11:06 AM

Sea surrounding sand
Not a voice to be heard here
Too lonely for hope

Majesty

Lacedaemonian · 08-29-2004, 06:28 PM

Blue blood - Sangreal
The son of God
Delivered to the muck

Gossamer

08-29-2004, 07:54 PM

The black widow queen
Gossamer sheen of her web
Hides deadly intent

I, Brian · 08-29-2004, 09:06 PM

Forgetting her cue
Cricket doesn't suggest theme
Brian takes over

Sand

08-30-2004, 01:42 AM

Gold periphery,
The two worlds merge, forming one.
Foam and sharp brine scent.

Tea.

Lacedaemonian · 08-30-2004, 03:47 AM

Plucked from the heart of Asia
Now steaming through my veins
Both eyes wide open

Beach

08-30-2004, 04:17 AM

Receding each fall
Renewed again each summer
Where is it you go?

Pickles... Your choice of dill or sweet.

08-30-2004, 04:28 AM

I lick off the juice,
sensation startles my tongue.
Only a pickle.

next up:
vision

I, Brian · 08-31-2004, 12:00 AM

I see with two eyes,
Creativity is mind:
I see with my thoughts

Sensation